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Second song attempt (Gods of Rock)

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(@metalwerk2)
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No responses yet on the first one. So here's the second one. It's definitely a rocker.

Gods of Rock
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(Fade in ... The Gods of Rock have arrived! The Gods of Rock have arrived! )

It's Saturday night and my younger days gone.
The dagger of time is stuck deep in my back.
But do I give up, do I whimper and moan?
Hell no, I'm bending and sliding my strat.

Don't tell me I'm too old to Rock!
I'll beat you till you can't sit down.
First you will rant, then you'll cry, then you'll frown.
To bed you will go, not a peep not a sound.

Oh, baby faced rockers fingers tender and round.
Hair glossy as oil, voices slenderly sound.
I am Mount Everest, I'm covered in stone.
Silver hair cuts like steel, my voice thunders gold!

Do you still think I'm too old to Rock?
Wanna match your wisdom to mine?
You are just grape juice, I am fine wine.
Go cry to your mommy cause it's your bedtime.

Todays music reminds me of slightly warm puke.
Robotic and lifeless it's lacking in worth.
Take cover, I'm loaded, I'm ready to nuke.
The old guys are coming to conquer the earth!

The Gods of Rock have returned!
You must bow your heads to survive!
Your elders are tired that you don't aspire
to break free and see you're alive!

(The Gods of Rock have arrived! The Gods of Rock have arrived! ... Fade out)


   
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(@rejectedagain)
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don't like this one as much as the first one, its alright though.


   
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(@metalwerk2)
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I think it sucks (fun to say that about my own song). Thought it was good when I wrote it, but the true test is to let it sit for a week. Came across stupid so I trashed it.


   
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