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(@artistx13)
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Just A song I wrote while I was playing with my slide. The slide part sounded really depressing so I wrote a depressing song
Feed back would be great

Thanks,
Micheal

(slide intro)

thunders rolling in
cant see whats creeping in
everythings going dark
not much is left around
since youve been gone
just an old man and his guitar
left to sulk around
you left me so confused
dazed, wondering what to do

I just sit here playing my guitar
watching the dust fly by
waiting for the rain to set in
cuz thunders rolling in

maybe if I listen
and watch the horizon
you'll come walking back to me
wearing the dress I always loved
your hair blowin in the wind
and youll take a seat beside me
and sing me a song
but those days are gone
and only the dust remains

I just sit here playing my guitar
watching the dust fly by
waiting for the rain to set in
cuz thunders rolling in

I miss you love
please come back
I dont know if I can make it
not much is left around
since youve been gone
just an old man and his guitar
waiting for the end to come
and be carried away by the wind
to meet you once again

(Slide Solo)

Ill see you again
Ill see you again
dont you worry love
cuz Ill see you again

"I named my son Marshall, yeah I named him after the amp. Of course that wasnt my first choice, I was gonna name him Peavy but my wife didnt like it."- Ron "Tater Salad" White


   
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(@rocketgirl)
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Artistx13,
wearing the dress I always loved
Love this line.

When I read the lyrics I get a strong feeling of loneliness. Good job. G.


   
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(@mysticmoonangel)
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I thought this was a great song ,but thought maybe the begining would roll smoother if you made a few small changes my sugestion would be

[thunders rolling in
cant see whats creeping in
everythings going dark
not much is left around]

thunders rolling in
whats that creeping in
every things going dark
not much is left of my heart

good work keep it up
mystic


   
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