Under the red sky

eh not to smart to post that your playjurising or however you spell it

Yo, it's just four words, I doubt the copyright police will care.

I believe the correct spelling is 'plagiarising', or 'plagiarizing' if you're American.

Yo, it's just four words, I doubt the copyright police will care.

I believe the correct spelling is 'plagiarising', or 'plagiarizing' if you're American.

Playjurising if you can't spell, mind.

Just a thought on the beginning of the song. It may not be keeping with your thoughts, and the meter is different. Just threw it out there to maybe get some ideas flowing for ya.

You could say...

I remember days gone by
Making plans for you and I
The red sky turns to black and fades to dawn

While others worked we just played
Enjoyed the moment of the day
Until we noticed that it was all gone

Also...it needs some kinda chorus in it. Do you have any thoughts on that?

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Hi, Idont think you would have a problem with the red sky at all.Dylons has long been forgotten by most. Plus ther are alot of songs with the same title. Diffenetly get a chorus and you'll be on your way.Nite.....