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Some lyrics I scrawled down on the bus earlier today; not my usual topic (quite the opposite in fact! :lol: ) and they certainly need more work!
No title as of yet, I'm sure I'll come up with one soon though.

EDIT: the last 2 verses are very *very* weak I think, I'm debating wether to remove them altogether and keep the song short....

Did you ever find
That someone
Who makes you feel
You're all you can be?

Did you ever find
Someone to love?
Who makes your soul
Complete?

Have you ever found
Another
Who makes your heart
Aflame with desire?

Have you ever felt
Another's voice
Seem to take you
Higher and Higher?

'Cos I know I've found
A reason
Yeah, I know I've found a way
To keep your love
Here in my heart
And that is where
You'll stay

You'll be with me
Forever
As I will be With you
And no matter how far
We may be apart
Our love will
See us through

Did you ever find
That someone
Who to see, you'd
Walk the mile?

Did you ever know
They were the one
From that first time
They smiled?

'Cos I know I've found
A reason
Yeah, I know I've found a way
To keep your love
Here in my heart
And that is where
You'll stay

You'll be with me
Forever
Of that I know for sure
'Cos there in your arms
I found what this life is for

Any feedback is appreciated + taken note of :)

Pete

ETD - Formerly "10141748 - Reincarnate"


   
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