WOOHOO! Another song! That's two in the last week! Well, these are an improvement over the last ones imo. But I'm still getting back into the cycle of writing again.
__ Verse 1
| drifting through my head
| not caring where i'm going
| remembering what you said
| i don't think i can keep going
| everything is moving so fast
| quickly shifting to the blur of my past
| i shouldn't be here, this life is too good
|_but i can't go back, because i know i should
__Verse 2
| i don't think i can keep this up for long
| i don't want to be here when it all goes wrong
| remembering your face
| saves me from this place
| you're the light in my darkness
|_ helping me to hold on
__Chorus
| everything is moving so fast
| quickly shifting to the blur of my past
| i shouldn't be here, this life is too good
|_but i can't go back, because i know i should
__Bridge/Breakdown type thing
| don't want to let this go
| don't want to have to go
| don't want to let this go
|_don't want to have to leave this place
i don't think i can keep this up for long
i don't want to be here when it all goes wrong
remembering your face
saves me from this place
you're the light in my darkness
helping me to hold on
everything is moving so fast
quickly shifting to the blur of my past
i shouldn't be here, this life is too good
but i can't go back, because i know i should
I wanna see it painted black, painted black
Black as night, black as coal
I wanna see the sun, blotted out from the sky
I wanna see it painted, painted, painted, painted black
If you dont mind I found a few nits. Heres some sugestion.
Verse 1
| drifting through my head
| not caring where i'm going
| remembering what you said
|" as you memory foreever showing"
everything is moving so fast
| quickly shifting to the blur of my past
| i shouldn't be here, this life is too good
|_but i can't go back, though i know i should
everything is moving so fast
quickly shifting to the blur of my past
i shouldn't be here, this life is too good
but i can't go back, Though i know i should
Just some ideas and only minor ones keep orsweep.Take care Nite.............
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Cool, I like the way that sounds. Thanks! :D
I wanna see it painted black, painted black
Black as night, black as coal
I wanna see the sun, blotted out from the sky
I wanna see it painted, painted, painted, painted black
