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I Just Posted My Latest Song on my Web Site

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 Jip
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Check out my new song "What Stop Sign" on my web site: http://chrismanning.net/ . Also, my first CD is available from iTunes: "The Road Back" - iTunes here: http://phobos.apple.com/WebObjects/MZStore.woa/wa/viewAlbum?playListId=140454474 . Any feedback is appreciated.[/url]

 
Posted : 04/04/2007 1:50 am
 Jip
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I know it can be difficult to check out new music from an unknown but I could really use some feedback from other musicians. So if you could check out my new song and send me a comment or two, I would appreciate it!

Hendrix and King's X are the bomb!

 
Posted : 06/05/2007 1:26 pm
 pbee
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Chris it sounds pretty good to me. I really like the acoustic bit at the end.

cheers

Paul


Check out my Reverbnation page here

 
Posted : 06/05/2007 8:17 pm
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This is just my opinion so, please take it with a grain of salt. I think the song itself is great but.....it seems way too loud to me. That is you may have used a limiter on the whole mix and I personally feel it has sucked the life out. Some more dynamics would give the song more room to "breathe", so to speak.

PERSONALLY, I feel that that the lead guitar in general is too effected. It is apparent that your playing is dynamic but that isn't showing through the effects. Again I personally, feel that it is too compressed, that some variation in volume would give your playing more life and the emotion that is already there the definition it needs to be expressed.

https://soundcloud.com/hue-nery/hue-audio-sampler

 
Posted : 07/05/2007 3:53 pm
 Jip
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This is just my opinion so, please take it with a grain of salt. I think the song itself is great but.....it seems way too loud to me. That is you may have used a limiter on the whole mix and I personally feel it has sucked the life out. Some more dynamics would give the song more room to "breathe", so to speak.

PERSONALLY, I feel that that the lead guitar in general is too effected. It is apparent that your playing is dynamic but that isn't showing through the effects. Again I personally, feel that it is too compressed, that some variation in volume would give your playing more life and the emotion that is already there the definition it needs to be expressed.

That's valid criticism. I appreciate you taking the time to review my song. I got a new pedal and so I probably overused it!

 
Posted : 07/05/2007 4:32 pm