found time to work at this great robert johnson number hope you like it, i moved away from his style of vocal a bit but see what you think guys..this old style blues really does it for me..smoke http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=547481
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Real nice Smoke 8) Only have one problem with it. I think you are singing a bit high in a few parts in the first verse. Not out of key, but you sound like you are straining a bit. Every thing else is excellent. ken
thanks ken i struggled with this and i thought the lack of feedback was telling me something :cry: will work on voice and re-shoot it ..thanks for real feedback....smoke
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i have re-done the vocal ken, can you re-score for me please...pulling out bad points are really helpfull, and i feel awfull to say what i really think at times! but in the long run its the best help we can get! thanks again ken .........smoke
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I like the guitar in this a lot. The harmonica at the end was cool. I need to get better at the blues haha.
"And above all, respond to all questions regarding a given song's tonal orientation in the following manner: Hell, it don't matter just kick it off!"
-Chris Thile
Smokehouse
Guitar sounds great, really wish I could play like you man, love it.
I just listened to it and I guess its the "redone" version, didn't have that big a problem with the vocals, but they are still a little "iffy". Not bad, but I think they can still use a little work; it could just be that they are too loud in the mix, ya know?
Harmonica sounds great as always, another thing I wish I could do.
Good stuff
thanks tasco dropped voice back a bit and i think it helps,but i know i am not hot on vocal :cry: but a do a great chicken and rice thing :lol: cheers.....smoke
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Very nice, smoke, especially liked the harmonica bit.
TZ
Big improvement on the vocal :D Nice job smoke 8)
thanks tasco dropped voice back a bit and i think it helps,but i know i am not hot on vocal :cry: but a do a great chicken and rice thing :lol: cheers.....smoke
Hey smokehouse, just to clarify: I was not saying you have a bad voice or anything like that, you're fine! Just thought with this song, and the way it mixed, wasn't sounding as good as it could. I'm no singer, but trust me, your voice is good enough bud!
Smoke,
Sounds good to me. Great job on the turnarounds.
John
Excellent Job!
The best part for me were the turnarounds! Everyone just different enough to keep my attention, great Harp too! Sounds like you got a little out of time but you do it a lot better than me. I have absolutely no problem with the vocals, I think that's the way it's supposed to sound!
(now I have to go back and practice...... :oops: )
When I die, I want to go peacefully in my sleep like my grandfather, not screaming......
like the passengers in his car.
Just got a chance to listen to this one Smoke... I like it! You're a great blues player! 8) Keep it up & thanks for sharing your music with all of us. :D
Dan
"The only way I know that guarantees no mistakes is not to play and that's simply not an option". David Hodge
