Song for critique if you have the time

Hi.. first post here..

I started this one the other night night
and when it was morning I realized if I really wanted to 'edit' the song correctly I would have to pretty
much start over. So with that in mind, and knowing I really had to go to bed some time soon,
in all it's tarnished glory, I present 'Kiss You' ..

Any Critiques, pokes, prods, jokes, slams or other would be appreciated.

Kiss You
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=6029937&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=6029937&q=hi