Hey! Please help me by commenting on my singing :(
Certainly strong, distinctive, and pleasurable enough to listen to . . . . . an instrument worth working with!
It was hard to tell with all the echo and reverb but I would suggest some pitch correction.
Sounds good to me. You do drift off pitch in a few places, but not dramatically so. You can address this problem very quickly with some lessons on breath control and voice projection. In the meantime, I suggest that you really woodshed the melody--pick a vowel or syllable sound that you're comfortable with and sing the entire melody through a few times using only that sound. Then when you have a firm grasp of the notes, add back the lyrics.
That should help a lot--but again the problem is not very serious. You sing well.
You do need to ditch some of that reverb, however!