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(@musicmaniac221)
Estimable Member
Joined: 21 years ago
Posts: 148
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Hey, I posted this in the Songwriting Club part of GN and I thought I'd post it here too, see how much crtique I get. So here it is.

Change

Change!

You can change yourself
Take your life back
Gain the light back
Release the demons inside

[Chorus]
Don't let darkness
Swallow your life
Don't let this
Get the best of you

It's so close now
You can almost grab it
Don't let this chance
Pass you by

[Chorus]
Don't let darkness
Swallow your life
Don't let this
Get the best of you

This is about changing how you live your life.

Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick


   
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(@nicktorres)
Illustrious Member
Joined: 16 years ago
Posts: 5381
 

Doesn't work like that here Nick.

The SSG is written according to the topic posted at the top of the forum.

Take a look at the FAQ


   
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(@musicmaniac221)
Estimable Member
Joined: 21 years ago
Posts: 148
Topic starter  

Ohhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OKAY! My B...LOL...im 14...please forgive me.

Do what you love, love what you do
http://www.acidplanet.com
-Nick


   
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(@lotto-king)
Prominent Member
Joined: 19 years ago
Posts: 777
 

your forgiven grasshopper

the SSG assignments are not always easy I have not posted a song for a couple of weeks but don't let that scare you away , it's just because I have become really slack and must start writting again , ohhh well

cheers

:D

Aghhhh

Not only am I a senior citizen

I'm now a bloody senior member

Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?

over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )


   
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