This is my second song posting and i know my last song was a bit hard to take in because of the words so this time i have kept it really simple. It is a song about death and this is my most positive take on the subject. Again i have to say it is an extremely simple song. I haven't even bothered to rhyme it so this is exactly how the words were in my head.
Goodbye little bird
We'll miss you tomorrow
But tonight we'll celebrate
the life that you had
the things you said to us
and the times we shared
It's not goodbye if we
don't even get to see you one last time
it's not a crime
to leave us little bird
so take a moment
to think about what we had
don't make us sad
cos we'll miss you
Little Bird
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I am aware that there is no actual structure to the song
so if someone could help me out there........
A handful of quarters, and a naked song, don't answer the question of where we belong.
Hi'a Voodoochild,
Here is my 10c worth !!! just swopping a few things around a bit, to get the meter right ( easier for singing )
Goodbye little bird ,We'll miss you tomorrow
But tonight we'll celebrate ,the life that you had
the things you said to us ,so don't get sad
It's not goodbye if we ,don't even get to see you
It's not goodbye, cos' we'll meet again some time
Little Bird
We shared your life, the warmth the pain
so take a moment, think of the times
let go now little one, it's not a crime
It's not goodbye if we ,don't even get to see you
It's not goodbye, cos' we'll meet again some time
Little Bird
It's not goodbye if we ,don't even get to see you
It's not goodbye, cos' we'll meet again some time
Little Bird
Go well
Ja'mir ;)
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that is actually quite amazing. I just left the song unfinished but your version of it is way better. thanks
A handful of quarters, and a naked song, don't answer the question of where we belong.
