from my experience, the only suggestion i can make is that if you write about a hundred songs (doesn't matter if you think they're not good bcos thats...

good job. its a pretty nice reworking :D

Is this verse one of the indicators to your explanation? 'fools gold' could refer to 'family', called a fools gold here cos he believes he doesn't des...

(Verse Three) Sgt. Pepper and his band, Played along with their lonely hearts, Billy Shears has us sing along, To their music we clapped our hands. (C...

thanks for the feedbackthe chorus does really have to be heard than readand the last two lines of the first verse are weak (any suggestions :?: )but t...

i wish i could but for now the music's just in my head and i don't play any instrument or sing well enough to record

it's a nice (meaning sappy, cute cuddly disgustingly sweet) sentiment but there is nothing that even remotely stands out on it's own. It's been said t...

this is absolutely a brilliant song. it leaves a lot options for what kind of music is to be played for it.

that is actually quite amazing. I just left the song unfinished but your version of it is way better. thanks