Didn't really plan this one but this is how it sounds in my head. If you don't get any part of the song just assume it's sarcasm and move on (that's what i did).
Love songs don't work, cos they grow old
Pain is where the money is, so i've been told
So I guess I'm gonna be rich now.
For all the stupid things i've said
I really think I'm better off dead
So consider this my last goodbye now.
(Chorus)
[ I'm Falling........... into my own
Puddle.................of fleash and bone]
You can walk away just like you wanted to
I won't stop you or beg you or bother you
With my fading thoughts now.
You play me like I play these strings
I'm flying away on broken wings
But I still would like to crash and burn now.
(Chorus)
[ I'm Falling........... into my own
Puddle.................of fleash and bone]
For now I think it would suffice to say
You should never've trusted me anyway
At least i'm not to blame now.
(Chorus)
[ I'm Falling........... into my own
Puddle.................of fleash and bone]
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That's it. Okay, so it is a little too long and i do end every verse with now but if only you could hear how it sounds in my head.........
A handful of quarters, and a naked song, don't answer the question of where we belong.
puddle of flesh and bone? eeewwww...hey! That's kinda gross!
Interesting triplet pattern.
It isn't used too often, and you did the rhyming well.
I like "Love songs don't work, cos they grow old"
- rubber ducky
Don't cry for me, fettucina.
Why don't you record it and upload it here?
I'm curious about how the music sounds.
You may say I'm a dreamer
But I'm not the only one
i wish i could but for now the music's just in my head and i don't play any instrument or sing well enough to record
A handful of quarters, and a naked song, don't answer the question of where we belong.
Hi'a Voodoo child,
I agree with the "eeewwww.." very gross :-/
If you can put the tune in your head onto the computer and change it to an MP3 format and send it to me, I can try and help ( don't worry about how you sing, this isn't a singing forum ;D) as long as you change that "eeewwww.." line !!!!! .
Send me a private message if you are interested and i will do all I can to help, and if i can't i am sure someone else here can. It would be good to hear the melody.
Go well
Ja'mir
I am a cloud within a cloud http://www.justjamir.com
you can hear my songs at :
I think the chorus is great. Good song.
