Great sentiment-full of musical milestones that spans a perfect era of music that influenced us all.It could work well as a really upbeat song or as a...

Duh!I am an idiot. I get it now.I thought it was about a divorce or something!(I hope someone out there can see now why I was so confused!)All the B...

It seems from the outset that you were writing about a time in the past, but I think the assignment is for a specific time in the past that is histori...

Much better even with just tiny changes. I especially like "no one knows who you are".S

Hey! I like the flow from the start, it's like a traditional love song, but you use some twists in other lines, which make it interesting.I was confus...

Thanks so much Bob!I actually recorded this with my band at the last rehearsal on Wednesday and listening to it now, it is a bit rushed, becasue I'm s...

It's great!Only thing that jumped out at me was the end. I think in satire one needn't directly refer to the thing they're satirizing, so I wouldn't ...

Ah, yes, but it could work if you're not singing in the first person. Try narrating it as a story maybe? It might seem too distant, but on the other...

puddle of flesh and bone? eeewwww...hey! That's kinda gross!

When you said it was about an abusive relationship the song totally works. But you know what throws the reader off at first? The first two lines."Th...

When you said it was about an abusive relationship the song totally works. But you know what throws the reader off at first? The first two lines."Th...

writing without control, where words "come and go" is a blessing to a writer!objectivity and logic can come later, if at all. The most important thi...