thanx guys I appreciate your opinions

Congratulations GDJPGRA VERY good song on the way!I particularly enjoy the rhythm of the lyrics. Congratulations for the avatar too. And your nickname...

Thanks! I'll try to add an mp3 link soon. I'm facing some software problems.

Hey! Dont take it so bad. Everybody seem tohave bad times. I fact life is a sequence of good times followed by bad times followed by good times and so...

it's a really very good plot. I like your idea and the structure of the piece(i mean rhythm and so on), but dont' you think that in the last verse the...

Fuck!I wonder how I hadn't noticet that stupid ... However.Ok. Thanks for the remark.I think that this would do it with the melody and syllables:I was...

Why don't you record it and upload it here?I'm curious about how the music sounds.