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(@dictator)
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Thanks to William Shakespeare I have inspiration. It basically comes from one line in the play Macbeth. But This is what becomes of it.

Truth Be known to all the Prophets
Even if they continue the falsities
Little beknown by all beknown to you
Truth be Sold by False Prophets

Fair is what we pay to play
Foul is the breathe we take
Once unsold I cannot stay
When Foul's the fare we have to pay

My books be read by all the lairs
Even if they can't see the falsities
Steal their souls and corrupt them too
My books sold as truth to lairs

Fair is what we pay to play
Foul is the breathe we take
Once unsold I cannot stay
When Foul's the fare we have to pay

Now What can I say
What Can I do
When Hope is Despair
It's embraced you
Now what can I say
what can I do
When Foul is Fair
It's erased you

Fair is what we pay to play
Foul is the breathe we take
Once unsold I cannot stay
When Foul's the fare we have to pay
Fair is what we pay to play
Foul is the breathe we take
Once unsold I cannot stay
Now Foul's the fare we have to pay


   
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(@taintedpoet)
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I like this song a lot. Maby that is increased in that I like William Shakespear a lot and I like the play Macbeth too much. Your song interests me because it can apply on so many differnt thems and leves however I have trouble finding a cadence in it or a particular flow. Yet it still feel like if flows when I read it outloud. It puzzles my mind I relly like this one.

No words no explination just music


   
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(@straycat)
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hey ya

really luv the 'now what can I say....' part near the end!!!!!!
when I first read your piece I didn't understand much, might be cause I haven't read macbeth... the more I read it the more I like it and the more I understand;)

one question, did you really mean 'lair' in verse 2 or is it just a typo and is meant to say 'liar'?

very good work:)
bluenightangel

"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin


   
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(@dictator)
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It's suppose to be Liars lol didn't notice that typo.


   
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