"YOUR NAME"
Your name is on the wall
I might just might
Give you a call
I need a good time
And I have a dime
This is truely a great day
I think there is even a gay
Your number caught my eye
There is a phone close by
Your number caught my eye
Then I let out a small sigh
I wonder if you are real
Thinking how you would feel
Long Blonde hair
And lips so sweet
Wondering if we can make a deal
This is truely a great day
I think there is even a gay
Your number caught my eye
There is a phone close by
Your number caught my eye
Then I let out a sigh
Are you really this hot
I bet your probably not
This is just ajoke
Man I need a.... smoke
This is truely a great day
I think there is even a gay
Your number caught my eye
There is a phone close by
Your number caught my eye
Then I let out a sigh
Numbers on the wall
Which one will I call
Numbers on the wall
Numbers on the wall
Fun bit of music please enjoy
Aghhhh
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Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
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A bit of bathroom humor. I liked it; and, who hasn't wondered if the numbers are real. I thought you captured the moment well.
"Don't get trapped by the tyranny of four" Rikky Rooksby
You've had a busy old week!
Yeah, this brought a smile to my cynical old face....couln't help but notice, though, have you missed a word out in the chorus? ("There is even a odd" seems to be incomplete.....like it should end with "photo" or something)
Reads well, easy to fit a rhythm to....good job. How many more songs you got up your sleeve this week?
:) :) :)
Vic
"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)
Thanks Vic,
The word "Odd" wasn't mine my line ended with a word starting with "Q"
and sounding like "EAR"
But I did miss one word out I read it a couple of times and thought it was right but it is not.
In a verse it should read "Are you really this hot "
I had a bit of fun with this and played it to some friends who all couldn't help but laugh , which was very funny at the time.
I think music can be fun if that is waht needed to capture the listeners ears, I just don't want to trapped in rutt writting love / sad songs .
I wrote this just thinking about all those names in bathrooms around the world and their funnny little messages .
I am glad you liked it , just throw some simple chords down and sing it ,
it will lighten your day up .
cheers
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
still working on one but will wait for next assignment
cheers
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
AAH - HAH....
All becomes clear...the fog lifts...the scales drop...etc...
There's a time and place though, for telling it like it is...pick your favourite word for people who are sexually-orientated towards people of the same gender, though, and you can bet it's non-PC....even though it may be a word they use between themselves.....so why not go along with it and use the PC word....gay?
Plenty of words to rhyme with that....
Doesn't cost a thing to save hurting people's feelings mate...
I have a gay step-son....probably one of the nicest people on this planet, charming, witty, intelligent...hah, he can't play guitar though....
When it's all boiled down, it's only where you put it...everybody has feelings....we all still belong to the same race, and that's HUMAN...we all have our flaws, some are more highlighted than others....
You wouldn't call Samuel L Jackson the N-word, would you? Yet he and Ving Rhames bandy the word about as if it doesn't mean anything.....(Pulp Fiction)....
I suppose the point I'm trying to get across is, some words are censored for a reason....and yeah, up to a point I do agree with censorship....10% of the human race are gay, better learn to live with it....
Vic...
Still a fun song though....!!!....just change those lines....
:) :) :)
"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)
"YOUR NAME"
Your name is on the wall
I might just might
Give you a call
I need a good time
And I have a dime
This is truely a great day
I think there is even a gay
Your number caught my eye
There is a phone close by
Your number caught my eye
Then I let out a small sigh
I wonder if you are real
Thinking how you would feel
Long Blonde hair
And lips so sweet
Wondering if we can make a deal
There are other names here
There is even a odd
Your number caught my eye
There is a phone close by
Your number caught my eye
Then I let out a sigh
Are you really this hot
I bet your probably not
This is just ajoke
Man I need a.... smoke
There are other names here
There is even a odd
Your number caught my eye
There is a phone close by
Your number caught my eye
Then I let out a sigh
Numbers on the wall
Which one will I call
Numbers on the wall
Numbers on the wall
8)
THIS SONG WAS NEVER INTENDED OR MEANT TO HARM OR HURT ANYONES FEELINGS I APPLOIGISE IF ANY ONE FELT IT DID
IT WAS JUST A FOR FUN AND I AM SORRY IF ANYONE FEELS THAT TWO LINES WERE DEFAMING THEM AS INDIVIDUALS
BUT I DO BELIEVE THAT P C IS GOINING TO FAR
MY WORD IS USED EVERYDAYVic asked for lines to be changed and I changed them for you Vic
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
I PREFER THE ORIGINAL LINES MYSELF BET CAN UNDERSTAND WHERE VIC IS COMING FROM.
DIRE STRAIGHTS " MONEY FOR NOTHIG" HAD A SIMULAR LINE TEAR LINE USED *****GOT , NOT MUCH WAS EVER SAID ABOUT IT .
I AM AFFRAID WE HAVE ALL BECOME TOO SENSITIVE ABOUT WHAT WE REALLY WANT TO SAY BUT AS FOR A DITTY LIKE THIS I AM SURE YOU COULD SING IT AND GET AWAY WITH IT.
I SUPPOSE IT'S LIKE WRITTING SONGS RHYMS ARE GOOD BUT IT DOES NOT HAVE TO RHYM
THAT'S MY $1 WORTHS
CHEERS
Yeah Baby Yeah
