I just threw this together this morning, so any input is greatly appreciated. I think I can definitely come up with something much better, but this just came to me.
Violet Dreams
I wake to hear your distant voice
interrupting my dreams of happier days.
Reality has come back to me now.
My voilet dreams now fade away.
Lovely memories and voilet dreams
of the love that we once shared.
Now a million miles away,
did you ever really even care?
Violet dreams of your touch,
Sweep the hair back from my face,
Kiss your lips, sweet like wine,
Longing to feel your warm embrace.
You have now made me realize
dreams and reality are so far apart.
Never again will I be so careless
when giving away my fragile heart.
You tell me that you love me
but you must be confused.
Because of all your lies and deceit
there's no way for you to prove.
You are like a child now,
lost with no place to go.
But it is because of your own will
that you have no one to take you home.
Violet dreams of your touch,
Sweep the hair back from my face,
Kiss your lips, sweet like wine,
Longing to feel your warm embrace.
Go ahead and call me a fool,
But never again, never again
will I have
Violet dreams of your touch,
Sweep the hair back from my face,
Kiss your lips, sweet like wine,
Longing to feel your warm embrace.
Hi'a jenlyncat,
I would change
there's no way for you to prove. to "you can not prove"
as it just reads better and rolls off the tongue better, otherwise it is very nice. a bit long though !!!! Tough to sing. Good luck ;)
Go well
Ja'mir
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