SSG Year 10 week 2

over breakfast this morning,( with David at Mom's diner) we came up with this assignment. We were talking about the qualities that make Bruce Springsteen songs so easy to identify with and came up with this:

this week you are only allowed to describe actions or objects in your song. you are like a reporter or a court room artist. you may not comment on the objects or actions beyond describing them. make sure your descriptions are objective and specific AND come from your point of view.

"the screen door slams. Mary's dress waves, like a vision she dances across the porch as the radio plays"

Good luck and good writing.