Here are two to get me going. I'm hoping to get in two to four more if my week goes well. Thanks to everyone for such inspiring titles. We could easily spend the rest of the year just writing these!
Cooler Than Suicide
(Geoffrey)
People will be shocked
Friends I swore I didn't have will cry
Not one will say the truth
It was a stupid selfish way to die
I won't even get to tell my brain
That filled my head with lies
I was oblivious to the obvious
Everything's cooler than suicide
All I Can't Say
(Aeryn)
One word might be all it takes
To make you smile and come my way
A single word could change our worlds
And it's all I can't say
More to come!
Peace
I like both chorus ...great job
fun assignment hey? wonder were bobs taking us
later mystic
Hi dhodge,
Cooler Than Suicide
I certainly like the sentiment here. I had a little trouble with the flow on line 2.
Friends I swore I didn't have will cry
Too many syllables, but just my opinion. Maybe some thing like "Friends I never knew will cry".
All I Can't Say
This works for me. I like its simplicity.
Good Job.
Hey dhodge,
I'm pretty much in agreement with pbee.
All I'll add is that for the suicide one, I think the words would be better as a verse to the song. I liked the last line, though, and I'd vote to preserve it.
Good work.
Ice cream is a dish best served cold.
