Was gonna write this one off as non-inspiring (and no fun), but
then I took a last look tonight. I got into it by sorting the phrases by syllable count. This got me started (the hardest part) which led me into the challenge of getting these seemingly disparate phrases to feel right together.
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The melodies are new to me
They strike a chord within
Turning thought to colors
Mixing in the din
Audiovisual madness
A rhythmic feast to see
Blending on this canvas
Perched in front of me
Let's see what happens
When the beat inside of me
thumps and clicks
smears and flicks
visions breaking free
Make the words matter
As the rhythm comforts me
thumps and clicks
smears and flicks
Brush and brain agree
Grace Under Pressure
Revealed so beautifully
thumps and clicks
smears and flicks
Sounds that we can see.
WOW! that was pretty good! i would suggest making a bit longer or repeating something but other than that I could imagine it in my head. nice job!
No matter what anyone says, these four men were the Innovators! of modern Rock & Roll!
Morse Code... Music on it's own
