Come in my friend you're not late
Been a while since I saw you
Time is worthy so don't wait
I'm the one you can talk to
You may say what's going on
Or you'll wear the white sweater
We'll trap you where you can't run
Feed you with pills forever
Your mind is pretty dirty
But I don't have magic soap
Bring me more gold from your tree
Then I can give you some hope
A spider lives in your head
I know it's already dead
They still think it's violent
Well I'm formed to keep silent
Maybe there are some lines that don't fit but I don't see them... Anyway I'd like your opinion and/or things I could change about this one. I also don't have an original title for this one and I would be glad if you could suggest me one...
Have a good day !
mapscientifik,
Seems you may have posted in the wrong Forum. The Sunday
Songwriters Group follows an assignment for each week.
This does not seem to fit an assignment. You may be better
posting it in Guitar Noise Songwriting Club
You are always welcome to post here if you want to try one of the
assignment.
I like the song and think it would get more attention
in the other forum
And Welcome to GuitarNoise
Celt
