here is another MP3
I have worked on getting the balance right between vocals and guitar
( still can't play or sing though )
I played around alot with the effects to change my voice as you will hear this has been one full week-end of singing and my voice is just about to give out ..
I think it's alot better then my first attempt ( Social Butterfly )
I still have a long long way to go
WEEK 11
DECIEVED BY AN ANGEL ( SHORTENED VERSION )
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=490569
Verse 1
She was as sweet as can be
When she was married to me
White picket fence
Our love was intense
Verse 2
In our love shack by the sea
It appeared to me
That things were not right
But I still got a fright
Chorus
Ohhhhh
She's an angel in white
But beware of her bite
She's a goddess in red
And the devil in bed
Verse 3
Why did she find another
Christ anyone but my brother
Now they have fled
Thats all to be said
Chorus
Ohhhhh
She's an angel in white
But beware of her bite
She's a goddess in red
And the devil in bed
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HILCH :?: :roll:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Hey Hilch,
you just at the start of a very rewarding (and sometimes frustrating) endevour. Your right you can change your voice and guitar to suit the mood of the song.
good stuff
Paul
Thanks PBee ( Paul)
With out the encouragement of people like yourself I would have never even dreamed of doing recordings , so thank you and others for the advise and the encouragement .
Also sorry for all those PM's just wanted assurance I suppose that I was not going to make a fool out of myself .
And now I can record it would be an ideal time to invest in ear plugs :lol:
Hilch :?:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Hey Hilch
one question though .. When did Dylan visit you ?
Very nice , very nice
Good song to listen to , would like to hear the full version one day mate
cheers
L.K
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
Hilch,
Very Good!
You appear to be a fast learner. I can hear alot of
improvement here over your first MP3.
Looking forward to more from you.
Keep It Up
John
Wow.. Really like that Hilch. Made me smile. I think its a great start. Chorus seemed short, or maybe I was just wanting more.. but man I liked it.
Not even sure I should be posting here... dang its been a while since I have written anything. I need to write something.
Less about me, more about you... Keep it up and definately keep recording. Very fun stuff.
Geoo
“The hardest thing in life is to know which bridge to cross and which to burn” - David Russell (Scottish classical Guitarist. b.1942)
Thank you everyone for such kind words
I have asked friends to listen to it for me as well and the feed back from them so far has been very positive .
Glad you liked it so much Geoo ( your welcome anytime to reply to my posts ) I don't care if you haven't written anything in a while .
All feedback is good feedback I say ( how else will I learn ?)
Thanks again everyone
Hilch :?:
p.s
If I post something horrible will someone tell me pleasseeeee
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
p.s
If I post something horrible will someone tell me pleasseeeee
Guaranteed!! Although, it will be in a very sensitive, kind way.
Geoo
“The hardest thing in life is to know which bridge to cross and which to burn” - David Russell (Scottish classical Guitarist. b.1942)
come on Geoo
google your name and write a song this week ...
please
Hilch :?:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
come on Geoo
google your name and write a song this week ...
please
Hilch :?:
I dont think I am going to write one for this week. But I have been working on one for last week. I know, i know.. I dont get full credit since I am turning it in late but I'll do extra credit in the future to raise my grade back up. LOL
Geoo
“The hardest thing in life is to know which bridge to cross and which to burn” - David Russell (Scottish classical Guitarist. b.1942)
like I tell my son
" push yourself , no better reward then achieving something on your own "
If we were being graded here could anyone imagine how much staying in after class I would have to do :lol: :lol: :lol:
hilch :?:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
LOL I use that line on my son too. But I am pushing myself, just behind. I started this last week and I am really happy with it. But its about something I dont know alot about so I had to do some research.
Look for it soon.
Geoo
“The hardest thing in life is to know which bridge to cross and which to burn” - David Russell (Scottish classical Guitarist. b.1942)
