This is a song I think will be pretty good. It is basic about how a guy sees a girl and falls in love immediately all you guys know the feeling. Over time though he realizes that she is nto all looks but in fact is differant then what one look could tell. Also this song is a giant metaphor for drug addiction and rehab.
Verse 1:
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Describes the in a kinda of look back kinda of way fading into the present.
Chorus:
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Gives the feelings in the now. Basicly it is conmtimplainting weither to leave or to stay.
Verse 2:
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tells when the girl or drug came into his life. and the affects that make it bad.
chorus:
Bridge:
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The final conclusion is made on what to do in the situation.
Chorus
Good metaphor, good topics.
It's a popular topic, but it sounds like you have a good idea (the metaphor) to make your song stand aside.
Give your song a strong voice and it will be great!
- SP
Here is what I wrote. Kinda more of an angsty song then I first had in mind but I guess that just happens when your 17.
Worth the Wait
I remember when we first met
Thinking of your gorgous eyes
Tender loving and sweet
But Now I'm not so sure your good
Not the goddess I once precieved
Are you even worth the pain
Are you even worth the wait
I think I lost my love for you
You quit on me, I quit too
You came when I was lost
Helped me to find my thoughts
Now you try to own my mind
Carelessly hateful with all your pride
Now I am tired of holding you
Are you even worth the pain
Are you even worth the wait
I think I lost my love for you
You quit on me, I quit too
(bridge)
You caressed my neck with care
Yet tension just grew and grew
I wish now that we never met
Couldn't you have left me be
No you took everything away
Are you even worth the pain
Are you even worth the wait
I think I lost my love for you
You quit on me, I quit too
