it's a short one, and a little strange, but there really isn't any more. please tell me what you think.
verse:
i'm sitting in the grass, playing the guitar
waiting for something new to come to me
it's a sunny day, the neighborhood's quiet
and my mind drifts to mortality
chorus:
in heaven, notes fall like feathers
laughter comes like ripples on a river
when you're home, you know it well
with the yellow sun above me
and an ephemeral melody
a breeze like this only blows through hell
verse:
i'm walking home and the world is still
my routine separates me from its beauty
i feel detached but i'm melancholy
the day drains and the wind blows through me
This is a cool song. It gets that feeling of detachment across. I actually found myself singing and playing this.
hey:)
I agree with hairballxavier, it's a beautiful song and doesn't really need any more verses etc.
I can relate to it, especially here:
and my mind drifts to mortality
my routine separates me from its beauty
i feel detached but i'm melancholy
the day drains and the wind blows through me
also my favourite parts:)
very nice song.
bluenightangel
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
Nice song. I really like the poetry. I agree with bna and hairball. Keep it up!
There's a thin fine line between hate and rage.
Now watch the line be crossed and break!
