Yep, reads really well now........!!!
Vic
:) :) :)
"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)
Not much to ad here, I think the revision is good :D :D I like your song.
I can't comment on the spelling, I'm the worlds worst speller :lol:
smokindog
Find all you need in your mind, If you take the time
This is verbatim from a song by Dream Theater... FYI...
Sauce
Yeah I kind of know that Jim.
Its actually from the song Take The Time, from the Images And Words album.
But, well noticed anyway.
Find all you need in your mind, If you take the time
Hi Spadge
I read this at the beginning of the week and was half way through a response when I was called off to deal with something at work and never submitted the post. I liked it then and I love it now - great sentiment without being sappy, good use of imagery and some great lines in there. Last verse tugs at the heart.
Difficult assignment but done really really well in this case.
Great stuff
Bob :)
You are what you eat, eat well
