week 51 Luna(thanks for your condolences)

hello..

the title is crap, I know. understand it as a filler, insert your favourite title here_ _ _ _ _ _....any suggestions welcomed :wink:

Thanks for your condolences, Luna

Dear Luna, didn't you get my last letter
It was all soaked up with salty waters
I'm writing you now just to say I am better
The birds they sing here, it is still summer
Their tune is more beautiful now that I listen

I flail sometimes, that didn't change a thing
It simply doesn't trouble me as much
As it did in the bottom of my wanderings
The stars unfold and gain some meaning
Which doesn't pass me now that I watch

And can you picture my horror
When I found out you're no sovereign
You only stun on behalf of another
Well, I guess I should not bother
A fake smile is better than no smile at all
That's something I learned during
The ‘dark ages' as one might call them,
The nights I spent mourning

This might as well be
The last time you
Hear from me
The letters were received
But you never answered
even one, did you?
still I owe ya one last verse

Luna thank you for shining
It made those wearisome nights much easier
Mellow your round face with the pale cheeks
I know that you didn't but it felt so lovely
Like you were shining for me

alright...what do you think about the orange part? let it be or erase it?
I suppose it kinda changes the atmosphere of the song to something a bit more aggressive, maybe(depending on how you sing it) and therefore contradicts the last verse/chorus??? :?

let me know what you think;)
bluenightangel