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(@anonymous)
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Hi Guys

I just posted this on the club but thought it would work well for the ssg14 so here it is......

Whole Half of Nothing

V1

You have to make sence of the grey
Theres' no black and white
Now we're breaking away
The truth is just confused

I'm misunderstood

Battered and bruised

Chorus

We used to be so good
Now its' misunderstood
By the way that i look

We used to be alright
But your hurting me
Night after night

V2

You have to understand
I can't live my life
By the rule of your hand
I'm tired of being used

Misunderstood

Battered and bruised

Chorus

We used to be so good
Now its' misunderstood
By the way that i look

We used to be alright
Now your hurting me
Night after night

V3

Silence is my scar
I'm running away
From the truth in my heart
I'm tired of being alone

Misunderstood

Battered and bruised

Chorus x 2

Please comment

Pet


   
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(@jamir)
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Hi'a Pet,
I like this, the only comment I can make is the use of misunderstood so frequently, but at this moment I can't come up with something better.
I like it here

I'm misunderstood

Battered and bruised

but I would try to find an alternative for the chorus

Just my 10c worth, otherwise, well done.
Go well
Ja'mir ;)

I am a cloud within a cloud http://www.justjamir.com

you can hear my songs at :

http://www.mp3.com.au/artist.asp?id=21709


   
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(@Anonymous)
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Pet,

I especially like the idea behind this, of You have to make sence of the grey
Theres' no black and white

- SP


   
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(@anonymous)
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Hi Guys,

Thanx for your comments, I was trying to use the grey, black, white and bruised as the colour imagery, battered can also mean bleeding - red.

And the misunderstood is more of a statement, like she is misunderstood and thats why she gets hurt and the relationship is mistaken for being happy when its not

its that kind of feel that i want, any suggestions are welcome and thanx for the replies - cheers

Pet


   
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