Hi Guys
I just posted this on the club but thought it would work well for the ssg14 so here it is......
Whole Half of Nothing
V1
You have to make sence of the grey
Theres' no black and white
Now we're breaking away
The truth is just confused
I'm misunderstood
Battered and bruised
Chorus
We used to be so good
Now its' misunderstood
By the way that i look
We used to be alright
But your hurting me
Night after night
V2
You have to understand
I can't live my life
By the rule of your hand
I'm tired of being used
Misunderstood
Battered and bruised
Chorus
We used to be so good
Now its' misunderstood
By the way that i look
We used to be alright
Now your hurting me
Night after night
V3
Silence is my scar
I'm running away
From the truth in my heart
I'm tired of being alone
Misunderstood
Battered and bruised
Chorus x 2
Please comment
Pet
Hi'a Pet,
I like this, the only comment I can make is the use of misunderstood so frequently, but at this moment I can't come up with something better.
I like it here
I'm misunderstood
Battered and bruised
but I would try to find an alternative for the chorus
Just my 10c worth, otherwise, well done.
Go well
Ja'mir ;)
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Pet,
I especially like the idea behind this, of You have to make sence of the grey
Theres' no black and white
- SP
Hi Guys,
Thanx for your comments, I was trying to use the grey, black, white and bruised as the colour imagery, battered can also mean bleeding - red.
And the misunderstood is more of a statement, like she is misunderstood and thats why she gets hurt and the relationship is mistaken for being happy when its not
its that kind of feel that i want, any suggestions are welcome and thanx for the replies - cheers
Pet
