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I saw this on the news when I came home today from work really wierd stuff. You song caught me off gaurd, I was thinking ghost spooky scary some kinda sad/angry feeling. I did not pick up on that at all it was more complacient almost as if the ghost has no feelings at all. I liked it, it did sound a bit childish to me but some really good songs have very basic and childish lyrics. I liked it. I thought the incorperation of the Hey Hey Hey's was a nice little touch.

Well thank you Taintedpoet , I was just couldn't believe the story in our local paper and my 21 year daughter made a joke about it , I wrote this in a "joke" sought of way .
I didn't want to post a sad ( red eyes / tissue ) song but something that someone might find totally different and like I said from left field.

But thanks again

cheers

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nice man nice

the ghost being thrown out of his home I liked that part

crayons to perfume ( who has watched "To Sir With Love lately ")

nice take along with Avril maybe ? ( What more can I say )

and let's not forget Mrs Robinson ( Hey HEY HEY )

Maybe it's just me but that is what I saw when I read it ?

but all together it works well and you have come up with a story about the ghost raising his daughter and now being thrown out .

selling your dad on e bay ( ha ha ) I suppose lots of children might try this now

good fun here

xxxx

Hey I didn't realise that I had ripped off so many artist and songs please let me explain

crayons to perfume I had come up with " i have painted , carpeted your room and needed a rhymn , and was thinking about this girls dad and how he is feeling and that just came to me .

as for hey hey hey well that's in about 100 songs dating back to 50 's 60's 70's 80's 90's and today's music so I don't feel I ripped that one off from anyone .

What more can I say , is used in the english language in australia every day I don't feel Avril owns that at all .

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OH BY THE WAY XXXX I HAVE LOOKED AND LOOKED FOR A SONG FROM YOU . WHEN SHALL YOU BE GRACING US WITH ONE ?

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hi:)

love the chorus, hilarious :lol:
yes, the hey hey hey could be from anyone and I don't think anyone took out a patent on it;)

adore the first two lines of verse1 and the ending is quite cleverly done.

very good work.
bluenightangel

Good work, I feel that the song doesn't have to be excellent so much as it has to flow, and you have done that well. I had a smile while reading it gj man

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cheers