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Y12W48 Five Tequila Shots Ago

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jamestoffee

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Topic starter 02/10/2014 12:26 pm

Y12W48 Five Tequila Shots Ago

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Five tequila shots ago
Five tequila shots ago
I had a thirst for some drinking down in Mexico
Five tequila shots ago

Five tequila shots ago
Five tequila shots ago
Her laugh was like a key scrape on my GTO
Five tequila shots ago

Chorus
Oh- o-oh o-oh
Five tequila shots ago
Oh- o-oh o-oh
Five tequila shots ago

Five tequila shots ago
Five tequila shots ago
I could count the hairs growing from her mole
Five tequila shots ago

Five tequila shots ago
Five tequila shots ago
I swore she said her name was Mario
Five tequila shots ago

chorus

Oh- o-oh o-oh
Five tequila shots to go

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chefie

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02/10/2014 4:31 pm

Hi James,

Cute . . . . in a good way. Made me smile. One teeny tiny idea . . . . change your last 5 tequila shots ago to 5 tequila shots to go . . . . .

Neil

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jamestoffee

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Topic starter 02/10/2014 10:04 pm

Hi Neil,

"5 tequila shots to go . . . . ."

Good suggestion. :D

Thanks for the listen and post.

James

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Topic starter 03/10/2014 10:29 am

Poof changes made :mrgreen:

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Hobson

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05/10/2014 9:36 pm

I see that you're exploring the minimalist approach to lyrics, which is not a bad thing. It made me laugh.

Just when I was thinking that the music needed some variety, you came in with the lead guitar. Think about doing something like that earlier in the song.

Renee

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jamestoffee

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Topic starter 05/10/2014 11:22 pm

Hi Renee,

Thanks for the listen and post :D

James

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