I'm not familiar with the words that were the inspiration for this. Definitely a song where the simple repetition of the idea works very well. Nice jo...
I apologize. That was my first reading. Your intent does come through clearly in the chorus and maybe asking the questions in each verse gives the son...
I'm not sure what mood you're going for. The first verse sounds positive. Then, it seems like you're saying that the little good things can't possibly...
I really like the lyrics. At first I was wondering about how well being hurt in the past fit with the feel of the song, but then it made sense in cont...
John, you don't have to stick to the facts. I think what you have written is a good start. Just go with it and see how it turns out. It's too early in...
Thanks. The muse hasn't been cooperating lately, but now I have a few songs in the works. Some for SSG that I never completed. The tune for this one c...
In case anyone else needs the info, I've ordered this stand:I have been assured by a guy at Elderly that he actually tried the stand with a U-bass and...
I agree that there is nothing very interesting in the music. This is just a framework that could could use some more instruments or harmonies. I don't...
Points for creativity.
Thanks for the comments. Sirdroid, I confess that I had no idea what you were trying to say. I think maybe you posted to the wrong thread.After playin...
I like the rewrite too. I think the lyrics have universal appeal.