You might get some comments if you post in the Songwriters Club instead of this forum. But, really, you might want to add some information when you po...

I can't guarantee that it's safe, but I've been using sponges in a baggy with holes for years. And I live in Arizona. Of course you want to play the g...

Simply changing the last word of the song from "someone" to "anyone" would make the verse fit better.Not sure that I like the sentiment of totally ada...

It is about someone with a terminal illness and a short time to live.I agree with your comment about the last verse. The last two lines are an analogy...

An excellent start. It's hard to write a love song with any new ideas, but I think you've got one here.Is the Magdelene that you're referring to Mary ...

I'm imagining a group of children singing this and I vote for changing the last two lines of each verse to reflect the verses.

Welcome to the forum.I couldn't get the sound file to play, so I ran through the sheet music. It sounds a little like you are experimenting with chord...

Welcome. I hope you can decide on something that you really want to learn and stick with it. It's easy to say, not so easy to do. Maybe getting a teac...

I added a third verse that makes it not so depressing.verse:The north wind is blowingSoon it will be snowing.It's Christmas time again.I think of Chri...

I've swapped verses 2 and 3 and added some transitional chords between verse and chorus. I did make it more universal by changing the idea of cleverne...

Feeling bad because it has taken me so long to reply. Musical commitments, family illness, broken water heater, etc. kept me from revising the song an...

Thanks for the comments. I'm not sure that I want to make it more universal, but will think about it. I do agree that verse 2 is the weakest. That ver...