Some good lines here, but as a whole, it feels disconnected. I am not at all sure who the singer is addressing. My suggestion, for what it's worth, is...

John, thanks for taking the time to comment. The song was inspired by several friends who have found themselves in this situation. My mother-in-law, w...

A very nice song. There are a couple of lines where the meaning seems vague to me."I’m with you for always though forever is never more" I think that ...

Years ago I had a guy who was not even a musician tell me that guitar is a man's instrument. I don't have any great comebacks. Things are a lot better...

James, I haven't posted anything myself lately. Life has gotten in the way. I have learned a lot from your critiques and have been amazed that you are...

John, that's a great idea for a song and a good solid chorus. I hope you get time to finish this.I can imagine using 3 or 4 of those lessons as the to...

John, thanks. You're absolutely right. Having so many repetitions of the chorus would make for a long and boring song. I didn't realize how many verse...

James, thanks for the clarification. When I first read this, I thought that the first two verses referred to a minister or a social worker. I did get ...

When I wrote the original version of this song, I felt that the music didn't really fit the mood of the lyrics. I then used the music on another song,...

James, I tried, but this is too cryptic for me. I haven't figured out who the singer is.

Overall a good job. Just a couple of suggestions. This is personal opinion, so take it for what it's worth.The first two lines of the first verse impl...

James, I just had another thought as I was driving home from the grocery store. (Why am I thinking about your song instead of my next one?)The lollipo...