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Y13W5 You are Blessed (A Wedding Song)

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jamestoffee

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Topic starter 05/12/2014 2:24 am

Y13W5 You are Blessed (A Wedding Song)

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=====Version 1=====

You’ve looked forward to this moment; now it’s here
You’ll look back on today the rest of your lives
You are blessed to have your best friend share this journey
You are blessed to have each other to hold at night

Chorus
You’ve looked forward to this moment; now it’s here
You’ll look back on today the rest of your lives
You are blessed to have your best friend share this journey
You are blessed to have each other to hold at night
You are blessed
You are blessed
You are blessed

As we send you off with a prayer
Marriage is like the wedding rings you wear
It circles round and round and back again
It’s all about the journey to begin

chorus

Instrumental

As we send you off with a prayer
As we listen to the wedding vows you share
As you look round and round and back again
It’s all about the journey to begin

chorus

=====Original Version=====
You’ve looked forward to this moment; now it’s here
You’ll look back on today the rest of your lives
You are blessed to have your best friend share this journey
You are blessed to have each other to hold at night

As we send you off with a prayer
Marriage is like the wedding rings you wear
It circles round and round and back again
It’s all about the journey not the end

chorus

Instrumental

As we send you off with a prayer
As we listen to the wedding vows you share
As you look round and round and back again
It’s all about the journey not the end

chorus

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chefie

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06/12/2014 4:19 pm

HI James,

Nicely done!

Neil

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jamestoffee

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Topic starter 06/12/2014 10:59 pm

Thanks, Neil. :D

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Hobson

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07/12/2014 2:08 pm

Love the music. Love most of the lyrics. I'm not too partial with the last two lines of the second verse:

It circles round and round and back again
It’s all about the journey not the end

Why would you mention "the end" of a marriage at a wedding? Or maybe I'm missing a reference. How about replacing the last line of the verse with this:

It's all about the journey with no end.

Renee

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jamestoffee

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Topic starter 07/12/2014 10:03 pm

Thanks, Renee.

I guess it's coming across wrong....it's like saying don't think of a pink elephant...and then the person does....

how about this:

It’s all about the journey to begin

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Hobson

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07/12/2014 10:44 pm

Perfect.

Renee

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jamestoffee

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Topic starter 07/12/2014 11:35 pm

Thanks for the confirmation, Renee. :D

POOF Change made :mrgreen:

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