hey:) see if you can find me in here...
straycat.
a child laughing on the swing
ladybirds drowning in the ocean
oh, my stray cat mind
scrawling letters and faces
lonesome ceilings contorting phrases
oh, my stray cat mind
hunched back song rapist
head over heels cowardice
[oh, my stray cat mind
silly longstocking puppet
weeping frontrunner bet]
oh, my stray cat mind
to and fro and valentine
window dreaming & basement thinking
i don't know if i want to leave the bracketed part out or not... it seems so long leaving it in...
hope you enjoyed it;)
cheers,
bluenightangel
p.s. straycat. is my nickname at last.fm and some other things.. would like to change my nickname here, too as i have long grown tired of bluenightangel but anyways.. figured it would be too much trouble. :lol:
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
BNA,
WOW! Something minimalistic from the usually wordy
Bluenightangel. :D I like it.
I think you may want to leave the bracketed part out.
It doesn't add much to the song and as you said only
serves to make it longer.
Good Job
John
Miinimalistic indeed....but still crammed with those poetic images you manage so well....
"scrawling letters and faces
lonesome ceilings contorting phrases"
......I found you!!!!
I always thought of you as a butterfly mind.....fluttering randomly with the breeze, bringing colour wherever it lands......
:D :D :D
Vic
"Sometimes the beauty of music can help us all find strength to deal with all the curves life can throw us." (D. Hodge.)
Blue,
I love reading your stuff just to see "where I can go". Thanks for sharing, Gwynne.
Hi BNA (or straycat)
I really like the way you've approached this I think it's great. Leave the bracketed part out it doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the song.
Great stuff
Bob :wink:
You are what you eat, eat well
Hi Blue
Some folks have recently changes their names around here. Just drop old Nick a PM and he'll probably be able to handle your request at some point in the near future.
Nice work, as usual.
Peace
