Hi, foolishly busy month, this. Anyhow, please bear with me as you read the following :wink:
Auburn and Old Lace
There's a dust on the sky that just won't go away
It's trapping the traffic lights' amber beating,
The lonesome disco beams, the glow of TV screens
I remember this eerie, wavering semi-darkness
From a house up north where I am forgotten
And I stand to greet it like a friend
For from what I can see through the rain hail-
ing the crossing of yet another idle day
The lamp on my bedstead's solitary, apart from
Me and the moth on the windowsill, it's only
Brooders and Lovers awake in this street
And, oh well, Pandora's sleepwalking
Auburn, the haze of the rat race
Auburn, expectation quicksand
Quarter to one, Woolf beckons and Miley, she
Finally holds her tongue though I still hear her laughing
My, I almost joined in
Old lace, holding onto garbage cans
Old lace, always tearing at ankles
Till mid-air, mid-jump I trust fall again into
Expired rhymes in the living room tomb and names on lists
Guess, I'll be working that shift, too
Auburn and old lace, it's been a sneaking debris
It's the deaths that I own and die daily
And, well, the cars are bound to scar me eventually,
Cursing from my bicycle between tram tracks without helmet
I think of how the parking beasts broke my dad
And he who said it's cooking, sleep and friends
You neglect first if under pressure, smiled dismally when
I glimpsed him today, five weeks after the stroke
So, with the sky as it's been for nights, I suppose it's on
No, we can't follow science and we won't heed the news
No, it won't help to say that we've had our fill
And it sure won't help to stay up
When everything's going down
And if the pandemic won't kill us
We'll be burning out at 21 anyway
Or the moment we exhale
That disciplined whale-up-on-the-beach
To study a moth on the windowsill
In Auburn and Old Lace
Oh, the deaths we die daily.
Rambling, I admit. But, on the bright side, it's already the shortened version! :lol:
Cheers,
straycat.
"oh, eventually it will break your heart" - anders wendin
Straycat,
on the bright side, it's already the shortened version! :lol:
Yes, I think it is one line shorter than T.S. Eliot's "The Waste Land" :roll: :lol:
I am not sure what to comment. It reminds me a lot of women in general....pretty to look at, beauty inside, but something that I really don't understand and am not sure I am really supposed to. :?
Very poetic if not an actual poem in and of itself......but I enjoyed the read.
The closest I can come to the meaning is these are snippets of ways "we" or nature or Earthlings die day by day one by one or sometimes in groups of two or more :?
Thanks for sharing.
James
Hi Anne,
Yes I can see where you are coming from here, the last line
Oh, the deaths we die daily
really sums it up for me.
Very poetic if not an actual poem in and of itself......but I enjoyed the read.
I agree, nice read.
Good to see that your still contributing to SSG unlike me who has been somewhat wanting in that department.
Cheers
Paul
Hi Anne,
Great piece as always ...
I read this with finger picking acoustic ringing in my ears , just wish I could finger pick :D :D :D
The imagery is fantastic as per normal with your writing , and I love the rat race line ...aka
Auburn, the haze of the rat race
Auburn, expectation quicksand
Just lovely writing well done as usual
Trev.. :note1:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am