you seem to rush through each verse to save time, but that kind of keeps each verse from sinking in.
*Poof* :mrgreen: slowed a bit
Vic Lewis VL wrote:
...for me there's just too much repetition, musically... I think you've already got the right musical backing - it just lacks variation.... for me, definitely need more variety in the music.Maybe more musical variety to allow for more length and listener patience.
*Poof* :mrgreen: I streched the melody line over two verses....better?
Don't mind the background chords...I was strumming a bit to stay on key...not really thinking about the chord changes...thinking "it should just fall into place"...WRONG...but it's the best I can do for a quickie for now...
Thanks to all for the comments and listen. :D
James
