This was a fun one :) Happened fairly quickly, weird set up lyrically with mini-bridges between verses but it seems to work.
Circling round,
And round again
Waiting for your
Star struck dream to
Come true,
But still, No-one knows you
Ripped right out of your home
And stuck upon a stage performing
Right, left and right again
Your whole direction's messed again
And now it's time to go back home
Cause no-one knows you
No-one knows
And you are left to start again
Right from phase one till the end
Fame is just
A lot of hoo-ha
Built right up
For you to go far
And down down,
Down you go
Right back down
Till no-one knows you
Down down,
Down you go
Right back down
Till no-one knows you
Fame is just
A lot of hoo-ha
Built right up
For you to go far
And down down,
Down you go
Right back down
Till no-one knows you
Down down,
Down you go
Right back down
Till no-one knows you
Hi Jay,
Good start :D Everything looks ok with what you've got so far. It seems fairly generic, but that might not be a problem if it's what you are going for.
If this is about a specific person, you might want more details....also it might be too short or right on the money depending on what music you have in mind.
Thanks for sharing.
James
