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(@pearlthekat2)
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Here's another idea for a verse

Imagine me and you
like in a movie
starring just us two
we'd see each other
and both of us just knew
the only trouble is
that it's a dream that won't come true


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(@jamestoffee)
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I had just finished writing a verse and checked the updates when I saw I liked the idea pearlthekat2 had and it seemed to fit with the idea I was thinking of a dreamer too lost in their own world....trying to make up with the partner, but still slipping back into dreamer mode to problem solve

Y10W29 Dreams that Won't Come True

http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11640814

V1
You said back then I was a dreamer
For all the plans I had for me and you
You woke me up to tell me it was over
Guess I overslept now we're through

Chorus
It's late but I've got work to do
I'm not wasting any sleep
On dreams that won't come true

It's late but I can prove to you
I'm not wasting any sleep
On dreams that won't come true

V2
Imagine life was like the movies
We'd see each other and both of us just knew
The only trouble is this scene
A dreamer's monologue just won't do

chorus

Bridge (Yet to be written)

chorus


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(@pearlthekat2)
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coming along
coming along....


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(@nicktorres)
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okay let's put in the bridge and finish this puppy up!


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