It doesn't conform 100% to the topic David laid out, but it's what came out. If I'm getting something from my muse, I try not to complain at all.
It’s so good to see you baby
It’s so good to be back in town
It’s so good to see you baby
That road was wearing me down
I had to leave town about a year ago
The sheriff wanted to put me away
He knew I was running moonshine
And I knew I could not stay
It’s so good to see you baby
It’s so good to be back in town
It’s so good to see you baby
That road was wearing me down
Instrumental break
I moved around from town to town
Always wanting to come back here
I met a lot of other women
But none like you my dear
It’s so good to see you baby
It’s so good to be back in town
It’s so good to see you baby
That road was wearing me down
Instrumental break
I heard Sheriff Brown was replaced
By a man that I call my friend
He’ll be willing to look away
For a little money to spend
It’s so good to see you baby
It’s so good to be back in town
It’s so good to see you baby
That road was wearing me down
Sounding good :mrgreen: You've got a great groove on this one. I think the lyrics fit the assignment fine. :wink:
I really like the hook.
Suggestions:
YOU KNOW I LEFT town about a year ago
SINCE sheriff BROWN TRIED to put me away
He FOUND OUT I was running moonshine
And I knew I could not stay
consider revising, I don't think any woman will find this as a compliment that the singers met a lot of women
I met a lot of other women
But none like you my dear
I heard Sheriff Brown was replaced
By a man I call my NEW FOUND friend
He’ll be willing to look away
JUST a little money to spend
Thanks for sharing.
James
Good suggestions, James. Some of those will probably make it easier to sing as well. Thanks!
James knows how to edit and gives great critique. I usually just say if I like it. I like it.
Wa hoo sounding good, nice driving rhythm and a classic story well done :D
cheers
Paul
