Picture
There's a picture on the wall
He catches my attention
no need of a trick
special people in it
Tears in my eyes or laughing on the ground
No matter the time
they offer me a smile
didn't you say, just a picture, photo shoot
well listen my friend, it's something you don't understand
You never felt like making friends
Gone to bed brave
Turned on the light
Looked upon the wall
Goodnight breathtaking earth
I'm pleased to have you walled
Goodnight scum
I'm pleased to see you dead to the world
I take it this song is about a picture on the wall that you really hate. But in the song you contradict yourself. Saying that the picture offers you smiles and laughs and then sayinhg that you hate it. It makes it a bit confusing, clear it up and lets see where its going!
Bstguitarist
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Morse Code... Music on it's own
I agree that this seems to be about a picture on your wall that you hate but for some reason you do not take down, maby it would be to your advantage to include why.
No words no explination just music
Tnx for the comments
I'm going to rewrite the song.
what i wanted to do:
the picture on my wall is a moment taken with some friends while we were having a good time. When I feel bad, I often look at the pictures in my room. Some people I know always say, it's just a stupid picture, don't know how it possibly makes you feel better.
I certainly don't hate that picture...
just started out. I will try to make it understandable
Oliver,
Nice work so far.
Like others have already said it needs a little Fleshing out.
Looking foward to the rest of the story
Celt
