Year 3 WK 2 Late & Unfinished

Hello,

I did promise myself I would my best to post as much as possible for Year 3.I've been rather busy lately and life is a getting a bit hectic. So here is another unfinished work. The picture comes from a Hospice book and is a young boy crawling up onto his frail grandfathers lap. They both have HUGE smiles on their faces.

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I'm the father of your father
Your gramma's closest friend
As your time is just beginning
Mine draws near it's end

So climb upon my Knee lad
Let me hold you near
I'll tell you all my stories
And we'll laugh away our fears

Celt

PS Sorry I have been able to critque much lately I'll try to improve.