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(@anonymous)
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I submitted a song about 6 months ago. Haven't had time to play much in the meantime but I'm back.

Big Easy
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She can knock them dead just walking down the street
She can knock them dead just walking down the street
Then gets on the bus and takes up the whole seat

She begged me for money and started talking real crass
She begged me for money and started talking real crass
I just had to ask her, "What do I get back?"

http://music.squeaky-wheel.com/BigEasy.mp3

A little self-analysis -

Apologies in advance for the vocals being too low in the mix. (You're not missing much...)

There's a 12-bar break in the middle, I actually sat down and mapped that out on paper. In hindsight I tried to cram too much in.

The outro is mostly improvised. It shows. But such as it is, the phrasing actually came out a bit more natural.

BTW I don't know how to improvise or use a slide, I just did it. You have been warned.


   
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(@anonymous)
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Oops, wrong forum. (I think.) I should have put this in the composer's workshop.

How do you move a post? Or should I delete and repost?


   
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(@davidhodge)
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I think you're in the right forum, actually...

Will get back with some comments a little later.

Peace


   
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