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nice one.
very nice I just can't seem to find anything on topic but you came up with a good concept as usual
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Very nice. Close along the lines of what I was toying with....
Falling in love is like learning to play the guitar; first you learn to follow the rules, then you learn to play with your heart.
Nice one Neil
I love the thought of dreams for sale that beautiful man ...
Lovely ..
Cheers
Trev.. :wink:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
now that I've posted my tune, I can get around to commenting on everyone else's.
as noted above, its a really good concept to fit the brief we had and your singing style sounds fairly relaxed and laid back, making it really easy to listen to. I'm sure I said that about your piece last week - the one I referred to Tim Buckley in my comments? anyways, the only criticism I'd make is a general one, that your singing style might make it difficult to maintain interest in longer tunes without more variation in the arrangement - I'd suggest paying more attention towhich instruments you use to accompany your singing, and what those instruments are doing. maybe some guitar lead work, or some legato playing using cello, or flute or something.
but, like I said, that an overall criticism - like if you recorded an album, it might sound repetitive if every track is just vocals and guitar strumming. but for a demo of an assignment song, this sounds great. :D
