k.um..this is about the black watch returning......kinda went at this with a very different aprroach than i usually do.just kinda went into my mind n just let it come 2 me without thinking...i dunno.....anyways,.......
We'll Never Know
V
Its been so long
Since youve been gone
And i never knew
Just what to do
Maybe i should stop and think
Of all i have, what i could give
Id say that i could make a change
But thats the biggest lie that i could say
C
I have been to long alone
Didnt know which way to go
So much right, was so damn wrong
But now ill be coming home
Ill be coming home
V
I will never feel
Just how real
It must be inside
To live those lives
To walk a tight rope everyday
Playing someone elses game
Drink the wine from the wells
Fall the holes are heros fell
Rain Shadow
hi
I thougth this was going very well then all of a sudden it ended , sorry but I think it is missing something maybe a bridge between chorus and last verse maybe .
Oh well I've had my say
so for so good though
cheers
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Hi!
This song sends shivers down my spine. Very good...
But, here comes the critic:
I think that the last two lines of the chorus (I'll be coming home) are too positive after all that darkness. Suddenly he/she is coming home? Maybe he/she want to, but is there a home to go to?
Maybe you could write another verse to come after the chorus to explain it more. In my opinion it's about a guy whose girl just left and the title "We'll never know" would then mean they they'll never know if it could work out.
Summarizing: It's a very dark and compelling song, only a little vague. It's like the second verse is about someone else.
Keep on writing,
Christiaan.
I liked your song and really like the last verse
I will never feel
Just how real
It must be inside
To live those lives
Drink the wine from the wells
Fall the holes are heros fell
but I was wondering if the "are" of the last line is suppose to be "our". I really think the last verse is really good at expressing the feeling of being the one left behind. And the line "To walk a tight rope everyday
Playing someone elses game" I think is great stuff.
"Don't get trapped by the tyranny of four" Rikky Rooksby
thanks a bunch guys...yeah, i took in wot everyone said in and prob gunna make some changes when ive got time,
Thanks Again!
Rain Shadow
