David, I agree that “he” could be confused with his Brother, so I made the change you suggested. I am not really giving up on the song, I don't t...

Chris, Thanks for taking the time to comment. Right on, by the way. I started writing and forgot where I was going along the way. I somehow turned...

Finally getting to post some tweaks to the song, "What they say" . Every small change seems to bring it's own large challenge, but I tried to keep it ...

Thank you everyone for your feedback. I am glad that I posted this here. I have always been shy about what I write, but I also know that I need feedba...