I agree with ken, and I know what your book or movie story is from but I won't give it away. Nice work. Matt

Maybe change the last line of the chorus toWould I rip the world in twoWould I cross the lineIf I realignedMy mind

For the purpose of this assignment its way off. I'm already working on another one about to cut down a tree or not. This song ended up so good after I...

Looks like I missed the mark on the conflict assignment with this one. I'm shifting this back to the vague assignment since I obviously had vague on t...

The song is about a super nova by the way. It happened once back in ancient times and lit up the night sky for a week or so. This song is about that h...

I love the meaning of your song, and I know the feeling!

MrEWorm is on the right track for the meaning. I already have the song pretty much written with music and everything. I'll get it recorded and post la...

Jack white talks about something in under great white northern lights that is relevent here. He says paraphrased, "the biggest creativity killer is ha...