I like how you repeat the first verse to wrap up the song. Good imagery. The only line that didn't seem to flow right was As here I stand in the co...

good tribute, my favorite part is the chorus and add vic's idea

you got great stuff, just put it to music

I read both of the mini songs you posted in this column, and they have a lot of potential. Your style is raw and emotional, which kicks ass. They do...

I play a bit of guitar and like to play emo and punk, I"m from central NJ, how far from Red Bank is Hudson County?