All these Australians here, good stuff. I'm not familiar with Happy Chappy in the sense you give it, but there you go. The last bit hits you a bit. I'...

Knocked back? This is what I'm picking up, correct me if I'm wrong.Just one little point of grammar - and it's hard to be non-specific about gender an...

I might be drawing a long bow here, but the rhythms and the repetitions remind me of a poem by Paul Celan, called Deathfugue. You should be able to fi...

I don't know why, but I like this, it's sort of mysterious (or maybe I'm sort of dense), but I find it both allusive and elusive. WHat's the music lik...

Are you paying attention is good, and So I lied, $%^&@ off has possibilities.

I can hear Reshape my Heart as a Gospel song (might not be what you had in mind at all, of course), and All I Can't Say is pregnant with possibility a...

Really good. Nothing forced, nothing artificial, good, natural use of the assigned words, I'm impressed.

Well, he said he felt like resigning when he had to go back on his party's campaign promise, but he's still in there at the moment. Hopefully, there a...

Are gone in deceits haze I reckon this song is good, everyone understands revenge. The line I've quoted (it might come out fine in the music, of cou...

Thanks, folks. Revisions are happening - it's in 6/8, and the lyrics fit in OK. Corrected version up soon. Thanks again for feedback, much appreciated...

I reckon that this is potentially incredibly good. Just a suggestion... The idea that carrying a torch for someone can hurt (haven't we all been there...

Invincible youth is great.Daring the devil his soul to take is great, too, a parody of the good night prayer, which establishes his character economi...