ya i was working on that just tonight. i wrote a verse that im putting as the very first verse. i think it should ahve 2 more verses with some kind of...

lol im flattered. thats a pretty big compliment considering the fact that i just started writing. also im working on the vocal melody so i should hav...

c'mon anyone else hae anything besides make it longer? what else did i do wrong? there has to be somthing

ok ill get on that. thanks

thanks man. but what can i do to impove it?

man i love this song, the music, the words, evereything. and you have got a great voice. i personally like the last part just fine. you should make a ...

when i clicked the link it played an 8 second add but nothing else

thanks. ya im going to try to make the story unfold as the verses go by. i think it might turn out to have alot of verses (think bob dylan) ya i did...